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Music.OC:Hanabira no Kioku+oe3 by =DawnieChan:iconDawnieChan:


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Song: Hanabira no Kioku (Memories of the Flower Petals)
tenohira de odoru hanabira ga kioku no tobira yasashiku tataku
My dear anata no koe kikoeta ki ga shita
ai yori wa sukoshi osanakute futari de onaji yume o mirezu ni
Fly away watashi no te o surinukete hanareta

kin no harutsuge tori yo ima doko ni iru no jiyuu na sora o habataite
toki o modoshite anata ni aitai kawaranai itoshisa de

samishisa o kakaekirenakute kizukeba koko ni hitori tatazumu
Lonely shiroki ume wa nani mo dekinai kedo

haru yobu utautai yo imasugu aitai hatenai sora ni tobu omoi
namida wasureta kokoro o iyashite anata no ai no uta de

yureru haru no hikari ni ima ryoute hiroge kako no watashi o tokihanatsu
kaze no utagoe maichiru hanabira tooi yume ga mezameru
kin no harutsuge tori yo ima kiseki hakonde watashi no mae ni maiorita
ai o kanaderu anata no shirabe ni hohoemi ga afureteku

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Translation:
The flower petals dancing in the palm of my hand softly knock on the door of my memories.
My dear, I think I just heard your voice.
Our love was a bit innocent. We can’t have the same dreams forever.
Fly away, you flew out of my hand.

Oh, the golden bird who brings the spring. Where are you now? Are you soaring freely in the sky?
Please take me back in time. I want to be with you again. My fondness for you has never changed.

I can’t stand the loneliness, and before I realized it, I was all alone.
Lonely, I’m so sad I can’t do anything right now, but…

Oh, you singing voices who bring in the spring. I want to be with you right away. My feelings for you fly out to the endless sky.
My soul forgets its tears and is soothed by your song of love.

I spread both my arms up to the spring light and release my former self.
By the song of the wind, and the dancing flower petals, I awaken from my far away dreams.
Oh, the golden bird who brings the spring has carried a miracle before me.
With evidence of your melody of love, I smile uncontrollably.


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Wahaha, I needed a new deviantID so I was lame and used the picture I was working on since the character, Kaida, is "technically" based after me. ^^; And this so-called deviantID has no information about me... oh well! Anyway~ It's also another addition to the music/lyrics series of artwork I'm working on~ :3
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Music/Lyrics Series Thus Far:
- Metamorphosis
- Hanabira no Kioku
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Tools: OpenCanvas3+
Art (C) DawnieChan
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very beautiful, i love the coloring!!

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its very beautiful. i love the use of colour to highlight different aspects. very nice^^

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That is really pretty. very soft. and kinda dreamy too.

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The only thing I find a bit off to me is her right arm but otherwise its very pretty luff =]

Plus I loooove how you do hair >D

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Very nice, the shading is well done. :)

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Thiiiiis is so gorgeous! @__@

I love how her skin is grey :XD: Stating the obvious a bit, I know >> but it contrasts so beautifully to the pinks and reds! I adore the pretty flower designs on her clothes and the way you drew her face, so pretty! Those eyes are just MARVELOOOUS~ I mean, lookit them lashes, wow! D8

The lips look so smooth and shiney *__*; They stick out without being obnoxiously contrasting. Love so much how you did the hair, especially the ends of it; they look soft and light like normal hair should! The petals themselves are gorgeous also, but my eye keeps going to those hands, I just LOVE the way you coloured/shaded them! The heavier shadows and such are in JUST the right places! :D

Great job, Dawnie! I so love your new signature/watermark too! :hug:

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:aww: beautiful poem and drawing to go with the poem!! Nice job!! :D

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The colors and expression are amazing.

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Ohnoes Pornoz.
This is beautiful, I love her eyes and the glow from the petals~

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